The Mystery Killer
by Hunter Fals, age 12, Oxford Middle School
Oct 28, 2011 | 335 views |  0 comments | 4 4 recommendations | email to a friend | print
This story starts off as a beautiful day out. I woke up this morning and when I walk into the kitchen all the cabinets open. I startled, thinking if anyone was here last night. I didn’t worry about it and went on with my day.

Later that day, traffic was hazard from a car wreck. This disrupted my day, wishing I was home with my wife.

When I finally got home, police was there at my door. I ask “was there a problem?” They said in return “Sir, there was a homicide in the house.” Then I thought the only person in the house was my wife. The police said “There have been multiple homicides in the city.” They have spent days looking for the killer but, never could find him.

One afternoon, the house was quiet. When I looked out the window, there was an unscathed shadow out beside the tree. The shadow leaned over, I was scared I ran through the house thinking maybe he wouldn’t come it the house. I looked out the top story window, the shadow started at the house. When police showed up the shadow broke off for the woods. I tried to germinate my thoughts from being expressed. The next day I was retard to find out if the killer would come back. When I go to work people tried to dissuade me to go home. When I go home I checked the house but, couldn’t find anyone there. When I turned around he was there, eye to eye. He pulled a knife and repeatedly stabbed me.

Now I’m dead, just lurking in the future killing innocent people. That’s my story cant wait to find out yours.
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