The Darkness
by Savanna Parsons, age 14, Alexandria High
Oct 28, 2010 | 891 views |  0 comments | 6 6 recommendations | email to a friend | print
I could still hear the shouting and yelling coming from the football field after the Valley Cubs’ victory. I would have stayed and celebrated, too, but I had chosen to walk to the game, since there was no other choice. It was a really bad choice, since it was about 48 degrees, and I still had another mile or two to walk. It didn’t matter how cold it was, or how much farther I had to walk, because either way I was told I had to be home at 10.

The street was quiet, since everyone was at the game. I was not used to going down Post Oak Road in silence on a Friday night. All you could hear was the wind whistling and, every once in a while, you could hear a dog bark in the distance. It was kind of creepy, if you asked me.

Breathing? Yes, breathing. Heavy breathing is exactly what I heard. I whipped around, expecting to see someone behind me, but as far as I could see, was just darkness. Empty, cold, darkness. I knew I must have been going crazy, so I just started to walk faster. As I walked, I heard the sounds of footsteps. I wasn’t going crazy at all. There was someone behind me. I was positive.

I stood there. Frozen in place. Frozen in fear. “Who’s there?” I shouted in cracked voice.

The creaking of trees and rustling of leaves was all the reply that I got.

I pulled out my cell phone and dialed the number of one of my best friends. The dial tone music rung in my ears over and over again, while I just prayed that she would answer. I was nervous for a while, and then became scared, now I was just plain-out desperate. I needed her to answer. My nerves were taking over and making me unable to think straight.

Now I knew I wasn’t crazy. I knew I was feeling heat on my neck. The breathing was slow, and I knew it was the person who had been behind me all night. I wanted to turn around so badly but it was like my body was made of stone. I wanted to run or scream just to let somebody know I needed help, but I couldn’t.

As its hands, his hands, wrapped around my neck, I knew that I was done. Every breath I took became shorter and shorter. There started to be no air left. Every bit of life that I had left just left me. All of my friends and family was going to be left behind. It was over …

I was over.
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