Ghost Writers
by Dakota Jones and Devin Barker
Oct 29, 2012 | 919 views |  0 comments | 4 4 recommendations | email to a friend | print

Hey, my name is Ethan. I am 4 years old and I am an orphan. I live in a cardboard box and have a best friend named Evan. We have had some great times the last couple of weeks. But he has been acting weird lately. I don’t know what’s up but it’s starting to scare me.

So today got really weird. I saw Evan walk through a wall. He ran away from me and I tried to catch up but he disappeared. Before I knew it, I was alone. He showed back up about 30 minutes later, but he wouldn’t talk to me. It’s starting to freak me out. He’s gotten really pale and slow. He used to be tan and the fastest kid around.

So it’s been a month now and I haven’t seen Evan in weeks. The last time I saw him he was almost completely transparent and, basically, a ghost. I didn’t realize it at first but now I see that he is a ghost. And now I know why I can’t see him. At night I hear these faint whispers and they sound mad, like it wants to kill me. I think it’s Evan…


Hey, my name is Evan. About a month and a half ago, I started getting sick. I was in the hospital for weeks about that time. I bet Ethan didn’t tell you about that, did he? That’s right, cause he doesn’t care about me. He never visited me; we had been pals a long time. So I started to really hate that kid, he calls me a friend but doesn’t show it. I died in that hospital; Ethan didn’t know it though. We weren’t that good of friends so no one told him, cause he’s homeless and all. So he thought I was just sick. I got pale and slowed down.

A couple weeks later, I turned transparent; I was becoming a ghost. He didn’t know it; he thought I just didn’t come around very often. I could see him. But he couldn’t see me. So about a month into the transformation I was a full ghost, I started torturing Ethan, because he treated me so badly in my life. A couple weeks after that, I killed the guy. Now, I control his body, and I killed his family and the people who treated me badly; while in control of Ethan’s body.

It’s been a month since Ethan’s death, and I’m loving it.
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